Tuesday, April 12, 2016

In Her Dreams

My two cents: I have a trilogy stuck in my mind. The following story is the beginning of the first book. I'm writing the three simultaneously, so we'll see how it goes. I'm obsessed with some things spiritual as well as mystic and intend to include some of it in the stories to come. Feel free to give feedback as to how to you like or don't like it.




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Talda looked down, ‘Who’s wrinkled, and knobby hands are these? They can’t be mine, they’ve got to be someone else’s, I can’t possibly be that old, can I?’ It seemed like just yesterday she was a blushing bride. Turning her hands over, she saw the familiar markings just below her wrists; she remembered how they glowed vivid violet when she was younger, but now were a dull green. Raising a hand to her face she felt the shriveled skin there. Yes, she decided, she was that old. She felt a sharp pain and pressed a hand to her abdomen. Talda could feel the disease running rampant throughout her body.

Her daughter wanted her to stay home; but she knew she had only one chance left. She would have to find the person who fit all the criteria the old teacher gave her. Looking at the women around her, she felt hopeful one of them would be able to carry on where she left off; at least that’s what she hoped. She would then be able to die peacefully knowing she had done everything to help her people. Talda knew in her heart this was her last chance; she knew her time was drawing to a close. She held her stomach as the coughing began. Taking her handkerchief out, she held it to her mouth.  She watched a young woman standing just outside the closed doors.

            Vannie stepped into the car and sighed; it was crammed full of people. She looked around and saw an open seat next to an elderly woman. She made her way towards her and sat down. The old woman coughed; it was a deep-chested, bronchitis-like cough. She felt sorry for the old woman; she had bronchitis before; she knew how painful and annoying a cough like that could be.

“Are you okay?” the young woman said, settling on the seat next to her.

 In answer, Talda waved her handkerchief and nodded.

“I have a bottle of water if you need it? She dug deep in her big bag and pulled it out.

Talda stopped coughing and took the cloth away, tucking it quickly in her pocket, before the woman could see the blood that now stained it. She moved closer to the woman, “Thank you, I always seem to forget to bring some and now with winter upon us, the air is so dry, it always tickles my throat.” She took the offered bottle and tried to open it, but she just didn’t have the strength. The young woman saw her struggling and smiled.

“Here, let me get it for you.” She took the bottle, opened it and handed it back to the old woman. She watched her raise the bottle to her lips with trembling hands.

Talda took a small sip, careful not to take too much, so it wouldn’t upset her ruined stomach and prevent her from carrying out her task. She looked at the younger woman; she was taller than Talda; maybe five feet five or six inches, slim build, olive skin; Talda guessed she was of European descent; definitely human. A very lovely woman; her most alluring feature was her eyes; amber, almost golden and almond-shaped; she thought that someone could very easily get lost in those eyes if they weren’t careful; the dark eyeliner the woman applied seemed to only accentuate the unusual shape. Her eyes were set in a heart-shaped face, with high cheek bones and full pink lips. Such curly hair; it looked as though each curl had a mind of its own, but together the ringlets framed her face perfectly. Yes, Talda thought; a very beautiful woman indeed. And she thought from the woman’s kindness she was as beautiful on the inside as she was on the outside. This pleased her and decided she would find out more about her.

“That is so much better.” Talda said, putting the cap back on the bottle “Thank you so much sweetie; may I ask what is your name?”

“I'm Giovanna, but all my friends call me Vannie” the woman said brightly.

“Giovanna is a lovely name.” Talda hesitated, not sure how to proceed,
 Are you married? Have a boyfriend?”

Vannie shook her head and Talda saw the young girl’s eyes fill with tears; before she could put her head down to hide them. Talda moved closer, “I’m sorry, sometimes I can be so nosy, you don’t have to tell me if you don’t want to.”

Vannie shook her head and wiped the tears from her eyes, carefully as to not smear her eye make-up, “No, it’s fine.” Vannie looked over and saw the old hands were gnarled with age and arthritis. Her gaze traveled upward and met the other woman’s eyes. A bright sapphire blue, sunken into her skull and deep, dark circles under them. Her face was thin and gaunt; Vannie thought she looked just like her nonna did before cancer took her. Vannie was deciding how much she wanted to tell this woman; afraid the woman might have a grandson she wanted to fix Vannie up with. She looked into the blue eyes and saw only kindness and concern. She made up her mind and began talking, “I was in a relationship for three years and we were to be married come March, but when I went to surprise him (he was off on a business trip in Arizona and I was going to surprise him on our anniversary), anyway, I went to the address he said he was staying; he said he was staying with some college friends. So I went there knocked on the door and he answered the door wrapped around this bleach blonde with fake boobs hanging out of his shirt; the shirt I gave him for Christmas.” She said indignantly, looking at Talda for her reaction, the old woman nodded, “So to make a long story short, I threw his engagement ring at him (it was a cheap one anyway) and took the next flight home. I haven't seen him since and I say good riddance.”

“I’m so sorry sweetie.” Talda patted the young woman’s hand.

Vannie shook her head again, “Don’t be, I know somewhere out there’s someone for me, my soul mate, my one true love. I just hope I can find him sometime before I die. If only I knew where to look; I would go anywhere to find him.” Vannie bowed her head.

‘A romantic too’ Talda thought; she smiled, she knew this girl might just be the one she was looking for, but would she be able to help; was the question.

The train stopped, “Well, this is my stop. It was very nice talking with you…” Vannie realized the woman didn’t give her name, “I’m sorry I didn’t get your name.”

Talda rose and began coughing again. Vannie moved closer to her just as she had hoped. Reaching out she took hold of the girl's forearms, pressing her wrists as hard as she could to Vannie’s. The younger woman felt a sharp pain in both her wrists, but she attributed it to the death grip that the old woman had on her; she was coughing so badly wracking the old woman’s body. Then Talda released the woman and sat back down; winded. Vannie saw the doors closing and knew the train would be leaving soon. She didn’t want to be late to class.

“Are you okay? I really have to go” Vannie said around the people rushing to get out the door; before it closed.

Talda looked at the girl and said between coughs, “Yes, I’m fine. Go sweetie, go and find your true love. I hope all your dreams come true.”

She saw Vannie wave as she went out the door. When Talda could no longer see her and the train pulled out, she slumped against her seat. She looked down at her naked wrists, hoping that Vannie would be alright; would be strong enough. She felt herself begin to shimmer and knew her life was over. She looked around; only a handful of people in the train car with her. The last thing she thought as she felt her molecules begin to break from their structure was she hoped Vannie would be okay.

If any of the humans were watching, she knew they would see her there one minute and gone the next. She smiled and accepted the dissolution.

Vannie had to run to be on time. She hated being late. ‘Why am I doing this again?’ ran through her mind, ‘To better myself’ came the answer. ‘But why? It wasn’t so bad being a receptionist, was it?’ she hated when she argued with herself, but she couldn’t help it. ‘It wasn’t so bad’ came the delayed answer, ‘Except for my overbearing, stuck up, annoying, keep everybody down so she looks smart, power-hungry wench of a boss constantly breathing down my neck. Not to mention I’m sick of being in the little reception room day in and day out, not even being able to have a decent lunch break because nobody wanted to deal with answering the phones.’ She agreed with the reasoning and slowed down as she reached her classroom. She still didn’t understand why the company she worked for couldn’t just use an automated system like everyone else. She figured the company wanted a “human touch”. But she also wondered how long it would last; she lived in fear one day, her supervisor would tell her she was being replaced. Vannie knew the woman would take pleasure in letting her go, so Vannie was trying to find something she really liked to do, she would love to write for a living, but she didn’t know if she was good enough.

That’s why she was doing this. She wanted someone to tell her one way or the other. She figured the professor of this writing class, would tell her. Vannie hated first days of classes; they were always stressful. She looked in and saw the room was filling up fast. She was relieved they hadn’t started yet; she walked in slowly and took a seat in the middle row. She brought her bag to her lap and was about to take her notebook and pen out of her bag.

“Hi my name is Brooke, isn’t this exciting? I’ve always loved reading romance novels; so I thought why not try to write them. What’s your name? Are you a writer?”

Vannie looked over and tried not to cringe. Her mind registered blonde, pretty, fake boobs and vacuous bimbo all at once. ‘I am in the worst kind of hell’ ran through her mind. She had to keep reminding herself although Brooke looked the same; she was not the one Vannie had caught with Gaige. She put her best fake smile on, “Hi, my name is Gio…uh…Vannie.” She didn’t think Brooke could handle her full name.

“Hi Vannie. Are you a writer?” Brooke hit her herself in the head with the heel of her hand, “Oh what am I saying; of course you are a writer, or you wouldn’t be here…”

Vannie just stared at the woman. She thought her head would explode if she had to listen to this for three hours.

She looked around frantically for an open seat. In the back of the room, she spied a girl who looked to be about sixteen waving to her and moving her humongous bag off the seat next to her; pointing to it. Vannie nodded, picked up her bag and made her way to the back, trying not to disturb the professor who just walked into the room.

Vannie decided against saying anything more to Brooke; she probably wouldn’t remember Vannie was sitting next to her anyway.

She made her way to the back, sitting down and looking at the woman next to her. Vannie saw the girl was not a girl at all, but a woman trying her best to keep her youth. She guessed she was a bit older than her; maybe late twenties or even early thirties in an ankle length black dress; an old, worn jean jacket on top. The woman had a lot of foundation on her face; Vannie guessed to conceal a bout of adult acne, her eyes were a combination of thick, black eyeliner and gray/black eye shadow extending from her eyelids to the bottom of her eyebrows; which were painted on with the same thick eye lining pencil outlining her eyes. Taken separately, the look was overpowering, but as a whole, Vannie thought it almost worked.

“Yeah, so I made the mistake of getting here early and sitting next to Brooke”; She pronounced the ‘e’ at the end of Brooke, as if the name was spelled Brookie. “Since I didn’t want to kill her or myself, I decided to move. By the way, my name is Wind.” She held up a hand, before Vannie could comment, “Yeah, I know, my parents were 60’s throwbacks. What’s your name?”

“My name is Giovanna, but please call me Vannie.”

“You’re just a little Italian, aren’t you?

Vannie laughed and put a hand up to brush a curl from her face.

“Cool tatt, what does it mean?” Wind pointed to Vannie’s arm.

“What? Oh no, I don’t have any…” Vannie looked where Wind was pointing; she gasped; what looked like Chinese characters were inked in light green on her right wrist. She quickly pulled up her left sleeve and saw the same; not the exact same characters, but in the same style as the other. She held out both wrists and just stared.

“They’re kanji, right?” Wind said, but Vannie barely heard her, lost in her own thoughts; ‘What the hell?’ she had no idea where they came from. She thought about where she and her friend went drinking last night; Lui didn’t mention a tattoo parlor; but Vannie wouldn’t put it past her to think something like this was funny. She thought back; she didn’t think she blacked out or anything, she remembered the club they started at; the one near her parents’ house; then they had gone…where?... ‘somewhere where a cute guy tried to buy me a drink and then I found out all about his mother and her bunions’ she shivered, thinking there were some things a son should never know about his mother; or share with other people. ‘So where the hell did you come from?’ she was staring at them as if she thought they would answer.

The professor looked at Vannie, “Excuse me, would you like to be alone with your arms?”

Some people snickered. Vannie looked up, “What?”

The professor walked closer, talking directly to Vannie, “I said would you like to be alone with your arms; you are clearly fascinated by your tattoos. Are they new?”

“Uh…yes…I mean no…I mean I’m sorry.” Vannie pulled down her sleeves and put her hands in her lap, under her desk.

 The professor looked back at her and smiled, “Okay then, my name is Suzan Sharp and this is How to Write a Good Romance Novel and Get It Published. I’m a published author, and know some tricks to help you become one also. You may have read some of my work; I write under the pen name of Sabrina Irons.” Most of the class gasped in recognition. Suzan’s smile widened “Okay, let’s see what kind of talent we have here.”

She walked to her desk and picked up the class roster, “I’ll just pick a name at random, when I call your name I want you to narrate the steamiest love scene you can think of. I want it totally off the top of your head” She looked over the roster, “Okay, for the first one, we’ll start from the top and work randomly from there. And our first lucky winner is Abrams, Benjamin Abrams.

A thin, tall, red-haired man stood and faced the professor, “Whenever you are ready Ben.” Suzan said.

The man nodded and began, “Okay, so the setting is a booth in a bar. This hot chick is saying how she wants this dude to f….” He seemed to remember where he was, he decided to reword it, “Uh she wants to have sex with him.”

“Okay, kind of predictable; but go on.” The professor sat on the nearest desk, with her feet on the chair, her elbows on her knees and her chin in her hands.

The man smiled, “Okay, so they’re sitting in a booth and they’re like making out two forty when she puts a hand on his pants and says they should go outside…”

Vannie only half listened. She looked at the professor who was dressed in faded jeans, a hole in one knee, a sweatshirt, advertising some obscure college Vannie never heard of, with the sleeves pulled up to her elbows. An overpowering wave of heat hit her and Vannie took off her coat.

“So, after they did it a couple of more times, she thanked him and walked home.”

“Okay, thank you Ben, quite interesting. Our next victim…” she closed her eyes, twirled her finger around and then pointed to a name; she looked where her finger pointed, “Santanaz, Giovanna Santanaz.”

Vannie stood, feeling slightly light-headed; thinking it was because she was nervous, she began, “Please call me Vannie.” She wiped her brow, which she found was damp with sweat. She never did anything like this before; she didn’t really feel comfortable talking to people about her writing; she only allowed a chosen few to read her material. She took a deep breath, wishing the butterflies in her stomach would stop, “The setting is the back seat of an SUV after a nice date.” She closed her eyes, took a breath and began,
He pulled up next to her car and turned off the engine. She got out of her car, opened his rear passenger door and jumped into the back seat.

“Now what are you doing?” Todd asked

“You said before you felt like a high school kid. Do you want to make out with me?” she patted the seat next to hers.

He looked at her doubtfully, “I don’t think I can fit back there.”

“Oh come on, it'll be fun."

He sighed, opened the door and climbed into the back seat. His knees were a bit cramped, but not uncomfortably so.

 “Now isn’t that better?” she asked as she pushed him down. She lay on top of him, her head on his chest. Raising her head, she hovered over him, put her face to his and kissed him. He held her to him and returned her kiss. She broke off the kiss and smiled wickedly.

A stab of fear combined with excitement hit him, “I don’t think I’m going to like what comes next”

“Oh, I think you will.”

She pulled up his shirt; kissed and teased his nipples with her teeth. He groaned and said her name. She kissed his stomach and looked down at him, “You have great abs.” He laughed and sat up to grab her. His kiss was rough; demanding. She pushed him down and again kissed his chest. When he could take it no longer, he grabbed her upper arms and again sat up.

“Is it my turn now?”

 She could see the desire burning in his eyes. She nodded and allowed him to lay her down on his lap. He pulled up her shirt and saw the lacy pink bra

“Very nice” he said in almost a growl.

He kissed her chest and stomach. He saw she was slim and tone; her abs flat. She wriggled when the stubble of his face rubbed against her bare skin, “I’m very ticklish” she tried to get away, but he had a firm hold of her.

“You shouldn’t have told me” he ran his finger down her side and she wiggled on his lap. She sat up and straddled his hips.

It was his turn to smile wickedly, “Now, this is an interesting position.”

He kissed her long and hard, until she thought she would melt off the seat.

“Lisa, I think we have a decision to make.”

“What’s that?” She started rubbing the inside of his thigh, while placing small kisses from his chest to his ear. He lost his train of thought.

“Lisa, oh God Lisa. Lisa, if you keep doing that, I don’t know how long I can be a gentleman.”

She accidentally rubbed a little too high and she felt the hard bulge. He groaned, “I want to know what it feels like to be inside of you.” He kissed under her chin, her neck and then her collarbone.

She nodded, “Do you have protection? Ordinarily I wouldn’t mind, but I am close to my period.”

Todd lifted his head and panicked; he knew he didn’t have any condoms in the truck. He didn’t usually carry them around. He wondered, did he even have any at home? He didn’t think so. That fact sobered him. ‘Why hadn’t he brought any?’ He ran his fingers through his hair, “No, I don’t.”

Lisa sat back on her haunches and looked at him; he looked as disappointed as she felt, “You don’t?”

He shook his head, “No, you’re not on the pill?”

Her face fell, “No, I got off of them when Pino and I got engaged, then we broke up and I didn’t think…” she trailed off; she knew he could figure out the rest.

He sighed, turned to her and kissed her softly, “We’ll have to continue this some other time.” He gave her a half-hearted smile.

“You’ll get some…”

“Oh yeah” he answered quickly, “You’ll go get some…”

“I’m calling my doctor tomorrow.” she moved off him and sat on the seat next to him.

“Well, I guess that’s it. I’ll see you on Monday?”

“I guess so.” 

“Have a good weekend.” He said, unconvincingly.

“You too.” She said as enthusiastically as he.

            They both opened their doors. Todd walked her to her car. Lisa saw the bulge still visible in his pants. He saw where she was looking.

He smiled and shrugged, “Wasted effort.”

She opened her door, got in, closed the door and rolled down the window; he put his head in the window and kissed her.

“Drive safely”

“You too.”

She pulled out and he watched her drive away.

He drove home, after making a stop at the drug store. ‘Fat lot of good it does you now’ he thought.  He entered his house; ripped his clothes off and stepped into the shower. The water was so hot, his skin turned red. He put his head under the stream, his mind wandered; he saw her beautiful smile, the way her eyes sparkled in the moonlight, felt her kiss on his lips, he remembered how she tasted, how it felt when she touched him…. He groaned, turned the water off, thought again and turned the faucet to the coldest setting. As the water cooled his senses, he felt himself calm. He turned off the water, stepped out of the shower and walked to his bedroom.” Vannie sat down.

“Very good Vannie, a very good narrative; a thwarted love scene; I like it.” Suzan nodded and smiled.

Suzan called the next name.

Wind touched her arm; “Way to go.” she gave her the thumbs up. Vannie returned the gesture. As she sat down, she found her stomach ache was becoming worse. What she thought was nerves earlier, hadn’t subsided and now she wasn’t feeling well at all. Her head ached and her stomach was starting to do flips. She hoped she wouldn’t get sick in class. She held up her hand.

Suzan saw her, “Oh sweetie, this isn’t grammar school; you don’t have to ask permission. If you need to go, then go.”

Vannie nodded and walked quickly out the door. She walked to the bathroom and entered the stall. She lifted the lid and knelt in front of the toilet, waiting for her stomach to decide whether or not it wanted to empty. She took a deep breath and decided it wasn’t going to. She lowered the seat; stood and pulled down her jeans. She sat on the toilet; she didn’t know why, she didn’t have to go, but she felt better just sitting there. When an unproductive five minutes went by, she stood and felt the ground shift under her. She steadied herself by placing her hands on either side of the stall wall. When everything returned to normal, she took one hand away and put it to her face; it felt cold and clammy. She stood up and opened the door. Staggering to the sink she ran the cold water; carefully patting her face with it. She walked back to the classroom and sat down.

“Are you okay? You don’t look so good.” Wind whispered.

“I think I’m coming down with something.” She said equally as quiet. Vannie felt a chill and pulled on her coat. She tried to listen to the other stories, but she felt tired and out of it.

Finally, the last person finished telling their storyfinally,rned pting ut your seat h. she ound and then pointed to the name, she l. ….. Suzan stood, moved to the front of the room and leaned against her desk.

“Okay, I think some of you really have the hang of it. For the rest of you, don’t worry, we’ll work on it. In this virtual world we live in, this class will be made available online the day after class. I will be e mailing you a schedule of assignments; which must be either emailed or handed to me by the time the clock strikes twelve a.m. on Friday. Know this, when I tell you a due date, there is no negotiation. Unless you’ve been in the hospital for the last week, unconscious, I don’t take late papers. Before you leave, please make sure I have your correct e mail address. You’ll be hearing from me sometime this week, with your first assignment and details on how to connect to online lectures.”

“So, I guess I’ll be seeing you. I hope you feel better.” Wind said as she picked up her massive bag.

“Thanks, nice meeting you.” Vannie said, walking somewhat unsteadily up to the teacher’s desk. She wrote her e-mail address on the paper and walked back to the desk.

Wind waved from the doorway; Vannie waved back; sitting back down in her seat. She watched the other students walk out. She put her head down on the desktop.

“Are you okay?” she heard Suzan say.

She slowly lifted her head; her headache had gotten unbearable and it was making her nauseous again. She looked up at Suzan, who looked a bit fuzzy and out of focus, “Yes, I’m fine.” She lied, “I just got my period and I have cramps, I’ll be okay.”

“Do you need some pain reliever; I think I have some Ibuprofen?”

The thought of trying to choke down pills when her stomach was so iffy was not appealing, “No thank you; I’ll be fine.”

“Okay, if you’re sure?” Suzan paused; Vannie tried to smile and slowly nodded her head. “You’ll be hearing from me. You made a good start today.”

“Thank you.”

Suzan nodded and walked out the door. Vannie reached in her bag and took out her phone. She closed her eyes and took a deep breath to combat the rising nausea. She focused on the numbers, then put it to her ear.

“Hello?”

“Hi mom, is Dad there?”

“No, he called to say he would be late tonight.”

“Is Matt there?”

“Yes, hold on I’ll go get him.” She heard her mother put the phone down and yell up the stairs to her seventeen-year old brother. She heard him pick up on the upstairs extension.

“Hey Vannie, what’s up?”

“Hey Matt, can you come pick me up, I’m not feeling well.”

“How’d you get there?”

“The train” she swallowed and tasted acid.

“Oh okay, I’ll be there in about an hour.”

Her mother had been listening and now cut in, “Vannie, are you okay?”

“Yeah mom, I think I’m coming down with the flu.”

“You’re not going to barf in my car, are you?” her brother asked worriedly.

“Don’t worry Matthew; I’ll give you a zipper lock bag she can use if she feels sick. Don’t worry sweetie, he’s leaving right now.”

“Keep your phone on you and I’ll call when I’m close so you can come out, okay?” she barely heard her brother above the ringing that had begun in her ears.

“Okay” she ended the call. She didn’t think she could stand, so she hoped there wasn’t a class scheduled for the room. A wave of unbearable heat and nausea washed over her and she threw off her coat and ran to the bathroom. After sitting on the floor, in front of the toilet for what seemed like forever, she heard her phone ring. She stood, fished it out of her pocket and sat on the seat.

“Hello”

“Hey, I’m pulling up right now. Do you need help?”

“Yeah”

“Where are you?”

“Bathroom, first floor near room one twenty-five.”

“Did you…”

“No, but I wish I did.”

“Okay, I’m parking right now; I should be there in a couple of minutes.”t a class in here now. a ight now. she '" "re and e stairs to her seventeen year old brother. she

“Okay, I’ll try to get to the door.”

“Okay, bye.”

She put her phone down, put her elbows on her knees and put her head in her hands. She didn’t know how long she stayed there, but the next thing she knew, Matt was pounding on the door, calling her name. Vannie stood and had to close her eyes; the vertigo was so overpowering. When she opened her eyes, she experienced double vision and shook her head to clear it; which she did slowly to not make the nausea worse. Opening the stall door with shaking hands she walked unsteadily; holding on to the walls until she reached the door. She leaned against it.

“Matt?”

“Vannie, is that you?” she heard his voice through the door.

“Yes. Can you open the door and help me out?” she moved away from the door and wanted to cry when she saw the form of her brother pushing through the doorway.

“Jesus Vannie, you look awful.”

“Thanks” she gave him a halfhearted smile, “it’s better than I feel.”

“Here, let me help you.” He put her arm around his neck and held her by the waist. It was awkward because of their height difference. He started dragging her towards the outside door.

“Wait, I need to get my stuff.” The double vision was back, as well as the vertigo and the nausea.

“Where is it?”

“In room one twenty-five.”

He steered her to a bench in the hallway, “You stay here, and I’ll get it. Be right back.”

She nodded and lay down on the bench. After only a few minutes; she felt him hoist her up.

“Come on, let’s go home.”

They somehow made it to the car; they had to stop every few feet, because Vannie felt like she was going to vomit; but never did. The last few times, Matt ignored her, wanting to get her to the car as soon as possible. He noticed that her skin was burning hot. He leaned her against the car and unlocked the door. He helped her into the back seat and handed her the bag his mother had given him.

“Please Vannie; please don’t barf in my car. If you love me you won’t.”

She wanted to laugh, but just didn’t have the strength. She fell asleep and was jarred awake when the car hit a pothole. She grabbed the bag and put it to her face. She thought for sure she was going to lose it, but her stomach stayed where it was. She breathed in and out with the bag on her face. Taking it away only when she thought she would faint for lack of oxygen.
The car stopped and she heard Matt open and then close his door. She heard him open the door and felt his cool hands on her body. He lifted her from the car and threw her over his shoulder. He opened the front door and put her gently on the couch.

“Mom, we’re here. I think you better come.”

She heard her mother come down the stairs, “How is she feeling?”

“Feel her forehead, she’s burning up.” She heard Matt say.

She felt her mother’s hand on her head, “Oh my gosh; Matt, help me take her up to her room.”

Vannie felt Matt pick her up again. She tasted the acid and fought to keep it down. Matt laid her in her bed when she bolted upright and ran for the bathroom. She slid on her knees to the front of the toilet. She lifted the lid and put her head over the bowl. She spit the acidic saliva into the bowl. She waited, but nothing further came up. She sat up and closed the lid. She put her head down; the cold lid felt good on her hot head.

“Vannie, are you okay?” she heard her mother ask.

She lifted her head and put her hand up to hold her head. She heard her mother gasp.

“What? For heaven’s sakes Vannie, what did you do to yourself?”

She figured her mother saw the tattoos; she didn’t want to get into it now; particularly because she had no idea where they came from; so she stayed quiet.

“Here, let me help you up.” Her mother lifted and Vannie tried to push herself up to help her. Vannie was finally standing, but she was sweating from the effort and shaking violently. She felt her mother’s hands on her waist, propelling her forward.

“Are those tattoos? I bet Lui talked you into getting those. You probably have poisoning from the dirty needles they used.”

They finally made it back to the bed.

“Let’s get you out of those wet things and into your pajamas.” She felt her mother pull her t-shirt off and unhook her bra. She felt the warmth and softness of her pajamas. Her mother laid her down in her bed; took off her jeans and slipped the cotton pajama bottoms on. Vannie had to fight off another wave of nausea.

“There you go. Now just put your arms under the blankets.” She felt her mother’s touch on her arm, “Oh for goodness sakes Vannie, did you have to tatoo both your wrists? You’re starting to look like that man on television; covered from head to toe in those things. No more, do you hear me?” her mother walked away, but soon came back.

“Open your mouth.”

Vannie did and her mother stuck a thermometer in.

“Lui should know better; I have a mind to call her up right now and give her what for. I don’t understand; you’re an intelligent woman. How in the world does she always get you to do these things that you know are wrong?” The thermometer rang and her mother pulled it out of Vannie’s mouth.

“Oh my goodness, one hundred three point two; I think I’m going to call the doctor and see what he says.”

Vannie just wanted to be left alone. Her stomach was still threatening, her head felt like someone was playing a drum on it, she was freezing cold and the room was spinning. She closed her eyes and hoped she would fall asleep. She could hear her mother talking on the phone.

“…So I should make sure she drinks plenty of fluids and if her temperature gets any higher, to bring her to the hospital? Uh huh, I see. Yes, she is nauseous. No, I don’t think she actually vomited. Should I give her any aspirin? Uh huh, I see. How about ibuprofen? Only if she can tolerate it; I see. It just has to run its course; yes, I agree with you there, doctor. So, you don’t think it was from dirty tattoo needles? Okay, thank you very much doctor. Yes, I’ll call you tomorrow and let you know how she’s doing. Uh huh; bye doctor.”

Her mother came back in and sat on the bed, “Vannie, the doctor said that you should try to eat. I’m going to make you a piece of toast with just un po’ butter. You try to rest.”

It felt as though her mother jumped off the bed. Vannie thought that she would have to make another mad dash to the bathroom. She held very still and squeezed her eyes shut tight. The nausea went back to being just tolerable. She shivered and huddled deeper into the blankets.

“Here. Vannie, Vannie, here take a bite.” She was too weak to even open her eyes. She opened her mouth and a piece of toasted bread was stuck in her mouth. She bit down, chewed slowly and swallowed; it felt like a lump in her stomach. She refused another bite.

“Here, at least have a sip of this.” A straw was pushed past her lips; she sucked slowly. Ginger ale filled her mouth; cold, tangy and sweet. She swallowed begrudgingly and it joined the lump of toast in her stomach, “You sleep now and I’ll be in a little later to check on you.” She felt a light kiss on her forehead and then the room darkened.

She awoke a short while later; on fire. She kicked off the blankets and contemplated ripping her clothes off. She had a sickening taste in her mouth was making it hard to fight her uprising stomach. She couldn’t stand it any longer and bolted for the bathroom. She stopped in front of the toilet and lifted the lid just as her stomach heaved. Nothing came up, but a burp. Vannie thought death would be better than this. She fell onto the floor and began to cry.

“Vannie, Vannie, are you okay?” she heard Matt ask from a million miles away, “Mom, you better come quick.”

Vannie heard her mother rush up the stairs. Another set of footsteps followed; she guessed her father came home and was now joining the party. She felt her mother’s ice cold hand on her forehead and cringed away from the touch.

“Oh maddona mia, she is even hotter than she was before. Come here Angelo and feel.”

“Where’s the thermometer? Just take her temperature so we can be sure.” Her father was always the practical one.

“I’ll go get it, it’s in her room.” Her mother said.

“No, why don’t we just bring her back there. Matt, please help me move her.” Her father said.

Vannie didn’t think his was such a good idea. Her stomach still hadn’t decided what it wanted to do with the earlier toast and ginger ale still sitting like a rock in her stomach. She felt strong hands on her arms and felt herself being lifted from the floor. They dragged and carried her back to her room. Again the thermometer was thrust into her mouth. After what seemed like hours to Vannie, the thing finally beeped and she opened her mouth. She heard the sharp intake of breath from her family.

“Angelo, what should we do? Should we call the doctor again?”

“No” Vannie felt cold hands behind her neck and knees, “We’re done fooling around, we’re taking her to the hospital. The next thing Vannie knew, her father carried her to the car. The ride to the hospital was an agonizing one. Her mother rode in back with her and kept touching her forehead, waking her over and over again.

“Okay, Matt and I will go in and get someone to help us. You stay here with her.”

She heard car doors open and then felt the car move when they were closed again. Soon, she felt more hands moving her onto a cold cart. She opened her eyes slightly and wished she hadn’t; the movement of the cart combined with the sight of things passing quickly by her did nothing for her stomach. She closed her eyes and willed her stomach not to empty.

            “Vannie, Vannie, can you open your eyes hun?” she heard an unfamiliar voice; she guessed it was a nurse. She opened her eyes slightly and then closed them again.

            “No hun; you have to open your eyes wider and keep them open.”

            She opened them again and saw two nurses looking at her.

            “Good job Vannie. Now we know you don’t feel well, but we just have to get your clothes off and put a gown on you. We’ll try not to move you too fast; we know you’re feeling nauseous.”

 She saw the women carefully remove her pajama bottoms and then her shirt. She felt the cold, flimsy cotton of the gown against her hot skin. She started feeling light-headed and the edges of her vision were beginning to darken. She felt herself drift.

           

Tuesday, December 15, 2015

If you would be so kind...

My $0.02: A while back, I told a friend that I had writer's block. They suggested I just start writing another story and let my subconscious work through the problems that I'm having with the first story. That worked fine, but now I've so many stories started, I don't know which to work on first. I could really use your help. I'm posting excerpts to my three latest writing pieces and would really appreciate some honest (>>braces herself<< "give it to me; I can take it.") feedback as to what you think about them. Thank you.

#1: Oddities:


Sam looked out the window from where he sat and saw the awning; once a blood red; now a faded pink. Even the white looked dingy.

            He sighed, “I should probably get a new one.” He breathed out another sigh, “what I really should do is to close the store; that would be best for all concerned.”

            “Ah, but remember, you promised you wouldn’t.”

            Sam looked back disinterested; knowing what he would see; the pointed ears, thick eyebrows and chiseled chin of his boss. Nodding, he turned back to the window.

            He felt claws on his shoulder, before he heard the voice, “And once you make a promise to me; there is no going back.” Sam moved his eyes to the left and saw the face close to his ear and breathed shallowly to keep from choking on the smoky breath.

            “Yes, I know. I have been meaning to talk to you about that Abaddon. You said I would be rich; that I would never have to worry about money again, but I’m not rich.”

            “Oh come now.” He squeezed Sam’s shoulder before taking a seat next to him, “I think you recall wrong. I don’t remember ever using the word ‘rich’.”

            Sam turned to look at him, “You told me I would never have to worry about anything again; that I would be comfortable.”

            Abaddon flicked an unseen thing from his pants, “And tell me; have you ever wanted for anything? Have you not a roof over your head. Do you not have gainful employment?”

            Sam stood and looked down at the creature incredulously, “Gainful employment? Gainful…” he broke off; too enraged to go on, “You deceived me; you told me I could run the shop anyway I wanted to. Why you had to come and bother me…”

            Abaddon stood suddenly, “You miserable cretin.”

Sam cowered from the thing that towered over him. The thing that stood before him now was hardly recognizable to the calm, collected being that had been seated on his couch only minutes before. Abaddon had grown in both height and girth, his skin was red, all his veins visible as ropes under his skin; writhing like a nest of snakes that had been disturbed. “You begged me to help you. You beseeched me to take you away from your pitiful existence. You knew what you were getting into.” He put a hand into his jacket pocket and pulling out a scroll, he shook it and it unrolled, “is this not your signature?” a long, black claw pointed to a red scrawling at the bottom of the page.

Sam didn’t have to look to know it was his. He remembered signing it; on the day he thought everything would end. Maybe if he had waited a little longer, looked for the good in life; instead of looking for the easy way out…

“Is it not?” the voice bellowed not only in his ears, but in his mind also.

Sam closed his eyes and turned away.

Abaddon, smiled satisfied, reverted to his regular size and color; rolled up the scroll and replaced it into a suit pocket.

“Now then” he looked at his wristwatch, “don’t you think it’s time that you opened the shop? People will be waiting; hmmm…?”

Sam nodded; knowing that any further communication wasn’t going to get him anywhere. He sighed, stood, grabbed his cap, pulled it on and walked towards the door.

Abaddon smiled, “I’ll see you down there then?”

Sam held up a hand, opened the door, pulled it closed after him and headed down the stairs. He thought as he counted the steps to the outer door. Twenty-one steps later, he stood out in the bright sunshine and squinted up at the sun, then looked across the street and saw the darkened shop; ANTIQUES was lettered in gold across the top of the window big and bold; the faded ODDITIES written on the awning seemed a dichotomy in mottled and weathered gray.

Each step he took towards the shop door, felt as though more and more weight piled onto his shoulders. Sam was a tall man, but he thought the weight compressed his 6’4” frame at least 3”. The light brown color leached from his skin as he got closer and closer to the store. The transformation in him completed when he finally unlocked the front door to the shop. His feet were like lead blocks and the effort to pick them up and put one in front of the other was more than Sam thought he could do. He flipped the light switch and pale yellow light illuminated the inside of the shop. Sam looked to the counter in the back.

“Come now; let me tell you what our goals are today.”

Sam felt the remaining color drain from his face as he saw the creature behind the counter. Putting a hand up he dragged it down his face; feeling the whiskers of his goatee. Each step he took bent him more and more, until he felt himself hunched over.

“I want you to push the doll to the third customer who walks into the door.” Sam saw the creature reach into the display case under the counter, and pull out a porcelain doll; dressed in a faded pink dress, white stockings and little black shoes. Abaddon held out the doll to Sam; who now stood next to him.

Sam looked at the doll and could swear that he could see the evil in the doll's dead, glassy, brown eyes.  He took a step back.

Abaddon tsked, “Come now; it’s not going to bite you.”

When Sam didn’t take it, he laid it on the counter, “Third customer, remember.”

While Sam watched, Abaddon disappeared and Sam breathed a sigh of relief. He squat to unlock the glass doors to the cabinet, put a hand on the counter, felt around for the doll and without looking at it put it into the cabinet; face down and closed the cabinet, straightening up and locking the glass doors.

The bell attached to the door sounded and he looked up and saw a man with two young children with him.

“May I help you find something?” in his mind Sam kept repeating, under his breath, ‘just turn around and go out the door. There’s nothing you want here.’

But the man kept coming, taking things out of his children’s hands as they picked them up.

“Excuse me, but do you have anything from the Victorian times?”

Sam was about to tell him no, when he heard a talon tapping from inside the showcase and looked down to see a miniature Abaddon pointing to a cameo pin. He hated the way this creature could be everywhere at any time.

Before he knew it, the little girl had broken from her father’s hand and ran to sit on the floor and press her hands and face against the front of the showcase, “Oo daddy, can I have that red doll?”

Sam watched as Abaddon was caught in the showcase and instantly became plastic-like.

The father approached the counter, dragging the younger boy, who was crying. He came to sit on the floor next to his sister.

“Look Joey, isn’t that a pretty doll? Don’t you think daddy should get it for us?”

They both looked up to their father. He rolled his eyes, “Okay, whatever.”  He took another look where his children were pointing, “and can I see that pin too?”

Sam nodded and unlocked the case. Reaching inside, he took out the pin and placed it on the counter. He was about to lock the cabinet when he heard the little girl’s voice.

“Daddy, didn’t you say we could see the red doll?”

Sam looked to the father, silently pleading with the father, not wanting such innocent souls to be subjected to the taint that came along with touching Abaddon. But the father nodded and said, “The red doll too please.”

“Of course sir.” Sam said, grabbing on to Abaddon by the waist and bringing him to the top of the case.

“Could you tell me a little bit about it?” the man said as he handed Abaddon down to his children who were jumping up and down trying to be the first to hold it.

“Yes sir. Well, legend has it that it was once owned by Lizzie Andrew Borden. And…”

The man held up his hands, “Wait, wait; THE Lizzie Borden? The one as in; Lizzie Borden took an axe and gave her mother forty whacks.”

Sam nodded and recited along with the man, “And when the job was nicely done, she gave her father forty-one.”  He nodded again, “Yes sir, the same one.”

He gave Sam an impressed look, “That’s pretty cool; in a macabre way.”

“If you say so sir.”

The man heard his children arguing and put the box on the top of the counter to break up the fight.

Sam picked it up and was about to put it back into the case. The man looked up from his children.

“I’ll take the pin.” Looking at his kids, he smiled, “and the little devil too.”

Sam stifled a laugh when he saw the two children putting Abaddon’s limbs in contortionist poses.

The man handed Sam the money, “Do you have a return policy if my wife doesn’t like it? It’s for her birthday.”

The cash register opened with a sickly ding, he handed the man his change, “Yes, she can bring it back anytime” ‘before it brings itself back; hopefully’ Sam added under his breath. Placing the pin in a rectangular black velvet box; it looked striking with the blood red silk as background. He showed it to the man and he nodded.  He placed it into a green paper bag with gold handles and gave it to the man.

The man nodded, “She’s always wanted something from that era; she’s a nut about it.” he took hold of the handles, “She’s going to die when she sees it.”

“I hope not”

The man looked at him questioningly, but then herded his children out the door.

Sam breathed a sigh of relief; Abaddon wouldn’t be around to bug him; for at least a couple of hours. He heard a sound like a pop and looked up to see a folded yellow blanket on the shelf. He knew it wasn’t there when he opened the store. He walked around the counter to just before the shelf.

“Did you get one?”

The blanket began to glow and then he felt the response in his mind, “No, I was found before I could assimilate.”

He nodded, “That’s good.” He backed away from the shelf, not trusting it, not wanting to be poisoned by the evilness that the blanket exuded, “that’s very good.”

When he felt he was far enough away, he turned and hurried back around the counter.



He closed the book he was reading when he heard the door chime.

A woman in her mid to late twenties walked in.

Stepping around the counter, he met her at the middle of the shop, “May I help you?”

“Yes, I’m doing a historic poetic reading and I was just wondering; do you have any antique dresses?”

“Hmm” he thought about the Salem witch dress; he knew that it was sold a week ago, but he thought that it had come back since then. He walked to the side of the store and began looking through the wardrobe hanging on the rod, “well, there was one, but I think it might have been sold. It was right…” he had come to the last piece of clothing, but then saw another appear, “no, I was mistaken; here it is.” He hated handing such a vile piece of cloth to this woman. To reconcile what he was doing, he kept thinking that maybe the people who actually bought items from his shop already had some stain on their souls and that’s what drew them here in the first place.

He held out the dress on the hanger.

She took it from him, “Oh, that’s perfect. I love the Victorian collar and everything.” She hugged it to her chest; making Sam cringe, “I’ll take it.”

He took the dress from her when she held it out, “Very good madam; come to the register and I’ll ring you up.”



She looked at herself in her bedroom mirror; liking what she saw.

“Missy?”

She turned to see her mom in the doorway; she came into the room, “What are you wearing?”

“I found it at the oddities store; it’s for my reading tonight.” she turned in a circle, “don’t you just love it?”

Her mother gave her a look, “Okay, whatever. Nana is waiting to see you.” she turned to leave the room. Missy followed, “Don’t you want to change first?”

She shook her head, "I want to show Nana; I think she'll love it.”

“Hmm” her mother let her go before her.

“Na-na” Melissa sang while walking down the stairs.

“Me-li-ssa” her Nana answered in a sing song, Italian accent.

They met at the bottom of the stairs.

Melissa watched her nana’s smile turn into a frown, then to a thin line she recognized as anger. Melissa felt her own smile falter.

“Go upstairs and take that off right now.” She thrust out her arm to emphasize her words.

“But Nana, I just bought this.”

She shook her head, “I don’t care, that’s evil thing, off now.”

Melissa put her arms around herself, “But Nana, I paid…”

She cut her granddaughter off, “And you will take back to the store and get your money back, now off now.” She stepped up and made a move to unbutton the dress.

Melissa knew she had no choice. She helped her grandmother unbutton then take off the dress. She watched as her nana held the dress in two fingers and opening the door, she stepped outside.

“Nana, where are you going?” she was torn between running up the stairs to get clothes on and following her nana to see what she was doing.

“Ugh” she said loudly and ran up the stairs.

Nana carefully held the dress out in front of her, “I know you. You no hurt my Melissa.”

She looked around and saw a roll of large, black plastic garbage bags. Placing the dress carefully on the ground and without taking her eyes off the dress, she opened the package, pulled one bag out, found the opening and shook it open. Taking it to the dress, she picked it up and held it above the garbage bag.

“Nana, what are you doing?”

Nana saw Melissa coming towards her. She quickly dropped the dress into the plastic bag, twisted the top and tied a knot in the top.

“Nana, why did you…”

She interrupted, “Here, you take this now and we go to the store to take it back.” she pushed her granddaughter towards the car, “come, I go with you.”

Melissa begrudgingly walked to the car, opened the door and got in, waiting for her nana to close her door.

Sam heard the bell above the door chime. He stowed the book he was reading under the counter and looked up.

“May I help you?” He recognized the woman from earlier today entering the store, followed by a small, elderly woman holding a large plastic bag gingerly in front of her.

“Yeah, uhm I want to return the dress I bought.”

“Okay, can I ask why?” He thought he knew the answer, but he had to ask.

“Well” Melissa began.

Nana walked in front of her, “I tell you why, because this thing is evil and you should be ashamed of yourself letting innocents buy such things.” She pushed the bag into Sam’s hands, “you give her back her money and she never come here again.”

Sam loved this old woman. That she saw through the façade to the truth filled him with hope yet fear.

“Of course. If you would just come to the register.”

“No, you bring money here, we go no further in.”

Sam nodded, “Of course, I’ll be right back.”

He walked to the back of the store, around the counter, placing the bag next to the register. Opening the cash drawer, he took out the money and walked back to the two women waiting. He held out the money to Melissa.

Melissa took the cash from Sam, “Thank you so much.”

“You’re welcome, please come again.”

Melissa smiled and turned to follow Nana.

Nana turned to look at her granddaughter and shook a crooked finger in her face, “And you never come here again.” she looked around Melissa to Sam, “and you” she shook her finger at him as well; “you should go away from here too.” Sneering, she looked around the shop, “this place stinks of the evil one.” And they walked out the door.

Sam walked back to the counter thinking he old woman was right. But he also knew he would never be able to get out of his binding contract.  He sat down, pulled the scroll out of his pocket and began reading.


#2: Spiders:


Daron walked in the door and saw Terina and Danial sitting at the dining room table. He hung up his coat and put his shoes into the closet. Coming to the two at the table, he bent to kiss his wife and pound fists with his son.



He looked around, “Where’s Leila?”



Before Terina could answer, they heard screams coming from directly above them.



Daron ran and reached the staircase first; starting up the stairs, taking them two at a time. He reached his daughter’s room and threw open the door and was just in time to catch a flying stuffed bear that was headed for his face. Stepping into the room, he took in the mess of the room; a little girl he had never seen before was standing on the bed; throwing anything within reach at something on the floor; Leila was sitting in the farthest corner of the bed, facing the wall, her hands over her helmet.



He could hear his daughter screaming, “CALL 911!!!”



The other girl was also screaming, “AHHHHH…IT’S GOING TO EAT US!!”



Keira grabbed at the lamp on the nightstand; readying to throw it; Daron quickly ran to stop her. Taking the lamp from her, he put it back in its place.



He looked around on the floor for the crawling creature that made his daughter act this way.



“It just went under the bed.” Danial said.



Daron squatted, lifting the bed cover to look where his son was pointing.



He felt a tap on his shoulder and looked up to find Terina standing there, holding out a tissue, “Here, use this.”



He took it from her and dropped to his stomach to look under the bed again, and found the offending 8 legged creature crawling away from him. Moving further under the bed, he reached out and using the tissue, he grabbed for it. He scooted out from under the bed, holding the tissue tightly in his hand. Standing, he opened the tissue and saw the crumpled mess.



“Did you get it?”



It was Keira who asked, but they all looked at him, waiting for the answer.



“Yes, I did”



A sigh of relief was heard all around.



“Are you sure?”

He looked at Leila, she held her visor open slightly. Terina had her arm around her and the other girl was on seated on the other side of her.



“Do you want to see?”



Leila shrank back. Daron turned to dispose of the tissue.



“I want to see.” Danial said.



Leila closed her visor and hid her face in her mother’s chest.



“Wow, that’s cool.” Danial said.



Daron turned once again to go.



“Can I see?”



He turned to see the girl who moments ago was throwing things at the creature. He realized he didn’t even know who this child was, “What’s your name?”



“She’s Keira from next door.” Danial offered.



“Well Keira from next door; are you sure you want to see?”



She nodded and walked on the bed to where Daron stood. Putting a hand on him to steady herself, she watched as he unfolded the tissue.



He watched Keira as he showed her what lay inside the tissue. She gave a look of surprise, then frowned.



“What’s wrong?”



She stepped away from him, “I feel bad; he was pretty.” She looked over her shoulder, “Look Leila, it has nice eyes.”



Leila didn’t answer, just sat there unmoving.



#3: Quick Changes:

Two more days, he thought, then he would get his phone back and be back at his flat. He didn’t even get a chance to text Preti that he would be gone for a week. Well, he knew he was leaving, but it wasn’t supposed to be until Monday morning. Sure, he could have told her before, and he would have on Friday, but how was he to know that his parents would be waiting for him at his flat; imagine, opening the door after an office party, turning on the light and finding your father sitting; back completely straight, feet flat on the floor. Luv’s saving grace was that he wasn’t in the mood to drink, so at least he didn’t stagger through the door drunk and have to hear a thirty-minute dissertation from his father on how he himself had never taken one drop in his whole life and how Luv should follow in his footsteps. But before he knew what was happening, they rushed him out the door, onto a waiting auto rickshaw, off to the metro station and onto a train for an eight hour ride home.
He learned the hard way that when he was in his father’s company, he could not be on his phone. His father held out his hand and Luv handed him his phone and watched it disappear into his father’s shirt pocket. That was five days ago.
The week started out okay; seeing old friends, eating the food he had been dreaming about and seeing his grandmother. Catching up with old childhood friends and seeing the newest movie. He was just about to take a nap, when he heard his mother calling him.
“Oh Luv, come sit with me.” His mother sang out sweetly.
He knew his mother; he knew he was probably walking into some kind of trap, but he didn’t think he really had a choice.
Walking into the room, he saw his father; mother, grandmother, uncle and a woman he thought he recognized, but couldn’t place, sitting around the table. It looked like some kind of inquisition. He took two steps back, but his uncle saw him before he could retreat to safety.
“Ah, there he is the man of the hour.” Rohan; his paternal uncle stood, came closer to Luv, put an arm around him and directed him to an empty chair, opposite the unknown woman, his grandmother on one side, his father on the other. He felt a his uncle’s hand gently push him down into the chair.
His mother “You remember Auntie Sundari, she was the one who found Samar for Vidya.”
Luv felt all the blood drain from his face; he suddenly knew who this woman was. A marriage arranger. His elder sister Vidya’s marriage arranger to be exact. He started to get up, but his uncle, still with his hand on Luv’s shoulder gently, but firmly held him down.
Sundari smiled, “I’ve a lot of nice women that will make good mothers for your children.”
“Look at this one Luv; she is a nice looker with good teeth.” His mother; Sita pushed a picture over to him.
He looked first at his mother, then down at the picture. He was a bit taken aback; the woman did indeed have good teeth, but what he couldn’t stop looking at was not her face…well, not all of it at least. What he couldn’t stop looking at was the mustache she sported. It was not just a shadow or play of light on some wayward hairs here or there. It was a full, dark mustache; one that made his modest mustache and goatee seem like peach fuzz. And it was right there; below her nose and above a prettily shaped lip painted with pink lip gloss. The dichotomy mesmerized him. He could not stop staring.
“I can see that you are quite taken with her, would you like to know her name?” Auntie Sundari said.
His grandmother leaned over and looked at the picture he held, “What is that on her lip?” she took the picture from Luv for a better look, she glared at Sundari, “is this one of those he/she’s?”
Sundari put a hand to her chest, “No, I assure you she is all natural woman.”
The picture was passed to Luv’s father, “No son of mine is going to marry such a woman.” He tossed the picture to Sundari face down, “what else do you have?”
Sundari; a bit put off, bent down to her bag, pulled out a manila envelope. Opening it, she pulled out several folders. She chose one and opened it, unclipped a picture and looked at it, “She is a medical technologist, a good job, a good family, a very cute girl.” she handed it across the table, to Luv.
Picking up the picture, he saw a very pretty girl. Her hair in a thick, long braid that was draped over one shoulder. He heard his father’s sound next to him; a kind of ‘she’s not too bad’ grunt. Luv’s father took the picture from him.
“What’s wrong with her?”
Auntie Sundari smiled widely, “No, nothing.”
Luv’s father stared at the woman until her smile faded.
She sighed and shrugged, “She may be a bit small.”
“Huh? What do you mean a bit small?” Luv’s grandmother asked.
Sundari kind of squirmed in her seat, “Just a bit shorter than normal.”
“How much shorter?” Luv’s uncle asked.
Sundari smiled again, “Well, there is not a reference, so what am I to say?”
Luv tried to help. Standing, he said, “Okay, I’m this tall.” He put a hand up, even with the top of his head, “Is she this tall?” he put a hand up even with his shoulder.
“Maybe a bit shorter.” Sundari answered.
Luv moved it down to halfway down his upper arm, “Here?”
“Maybe a little bit” she held up a hand, the distance between her thumb and forefinger about two inches.
Luv’s father stood, “Enough of this.” He faced Sundari, “How tall is the woman?”
“Well” she stood and rounded the table to stand near Luv, “maybe here.” She held a hand even with his waist.
Everyone was speechless. Luv was the first to recover, he faced her, “So, she’s 150 cm?”
“Hmmmmaybe a little less.”
“Look, how tall is she?” Luv’s father was fed up.
“137 cm” Sundari blurted.
Luv sat down, “So I would be over 40 cm taller than her?”
“And the other one?” Luv’s father pointed to the folders at Sundari’s place.
“Oh, she is a lovely girl”
Luv’s father held his hand out to her, “Give her picture to me, I will decide.”
Luv stood just inches taller than his father, looking at the picture in his father’s hand, he saw a middle aged woman.
“How old is she?” Luv asked a little upset by all of this.
Sundari smiled, “You must understand, it is getting towards the end of the season.”
Vikaram was not smiling, “Do you have any women between the ages of twenty-five and twenty-eight?”
Sundari motioned to the mustached woman, “She is…”
“Without facial hair, at least 165 cm.” Vikaram’s face was red now.
Sundari saw everyone looking at her, waiting. She lowered her head, “No”
“We are done here then.” Vikaram threw the pictures of the women unceremoniously in Sundari’s direction.
She put the pictures in the folders, put them back into the envelope and into her bag, “If I find some, I will call.”
“Yes, yes, yes.” Vikaram waved her away.
The women left; Luv, his father and his uncle were left.
“I will look for a good match don’t worry.” Rohan also left the room.
“What was that?”
His father looked at him, “You should be getting married. You have a good job, you make good money, it’s time for you to marry and have a good life. You’ve had your fun; it’s time to be a man.”
              “But I told you I don’t want to be arranged.”
              His father looked at his hands and stayed quiet.
Luv tried to appeal to his softer side, “Please, I don’t want to be forced to marry someone I don’t love.”
              His father made a sound of disgust, “Love is a myth; stop chasing dreams. What’s real is to get a good match, have good, strong, intelligent children and live your life.”
              He controlled the anger he felt. He respected his father, but on this he would stand strong. He had to think what to say, he knew if he lost his temper now, his father would only see him as a rebellious child. He slowed his breathing, when he felt calm, he began, “You told me you would let me choose?”
              “That was three years ago and what do you have to show for it? Are you engaged? Even close to getting engaged? Do you even have a girl you at least like?”
              Luv shook his head, “I won’t be arranged; I’ll run away if I have to.”
              “Leave him alone”
              They both turned to see his grandmother coming towards them.
              His father tutted, “Mami, please stay out of it.”
              She came to her grandson, took his face in her hands and smiled at him, “My Luv.” She pulled him from his seat, “you go see what Vimla is cooking, go.” She smiled and watched him leave.
              “Mami, you should not have let him go. You should have stayed out of it.”
              “Ah, the way I left you alone when your father wanted you to marry; and you were older than Luv is now, or do you not remember; the girl with the nose for the face?”
              “Yes, but”
              She held up a finger, “And, you were married not long after that.”
              “Yes, but”
              She held up a finger again, “And?”
              He sighed, getting her point, “And it turned out well.”
              She smiled and touched her son’s face, “He is just like you. And, like you, he will find his own way.”
              He looked to the doorway, “But Mami, I worry about him.”
              Her face was kind, “That’s what makes you a good father.”
              He looked down at his hands, “He hates me.”
              “Nonsense, he loves you. It’s just that you two are too alike; two headstrong men.”
              “I just hope he will find his way.”
              She waved a hand, “He will be fine. Just see.”
              Luv went directly to his father’s office, to his desk, to the bottom drawer and retrieved his phone.  Turning it on, he looked at all the missed messages. He smiled when he saw a message from the leader of the touring motorcycle club he belonged to. Reading it quickly, before he could be found out. A trip was being scheduled for Friday. Luv sent a message back, saying he would be there; something to look forward to. Next, he opened the app that he and Preti communicated on, he saw there were at least three pages of messages, but he had to close it quickly when he heard his name being called.
              “Luv? Come to dinner.”
              “Coming” he said as he turned off and replaced his phone into the desk drawer.